September. In my essay, The Night Thoreau Spent in Jail, Ashley gave me feedback as follows. My first major area of improvement was to embed my quotes. Instead of just dropping them in, I should provide context that helps the reader understand. Thus, my first writing goal is to follow a more basic guideline.
This also includes not getting too carried away in eloquent language that dilutes my message. I find myself getting caught up in the eloquence of what I am writing, the poetic justice of it to such an extent that it waters down my main ideas. My next goal in writing is to not use it as an escape. Though a great form of expression, I find myself only comfortable speaking through paper. I want to be able to freely speak and not rely so intensely on writing. This is my second goal, and I hope to find my voice, both on paper and in reality
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